commuting angel*


you seem tired...

and your blue eyes

are almost shut

on the busy trail

you doze

whilst a heavy head rocks

gently in the sway

 

you do not disclose

your mystery...

as you awake serene

in your sober city garb

at saint albans

 

beyond the sound

of the headlong rush

back and forth -

the gush

of the long dark tunnel

or opposing train

heard through the drifting scene...

the gold-brown autumn fields

sparsely peppered with sheep

 

you do not disclose

your mystery...

as you awake serene

in your sober city garb

at saint albans

 

your sleep

is hardly interrupted

and your beautiful round face

that of an angel

of some kind

remains unperturbed...

even as the journey draws

to its end

 

you alone have inspired

these lines

you have fired

a longing to record

you you!

you unknow lady

of this mortal plain

now gone without a word

 

you do not disclose

your mystery...

as you awake serene

in your sober city garb

at saint albans

 

and even with your loss

your memory remains

pleasently with me

* young woman seen on the train from london to harpenden
   at around 7:00 pm on 
wednesday, 15th september 1999

text: hugh d. loxdale

musik: michael a. schnase  © 2015 m.a.schnase.music



der text für diesen song ist dem gedichtband "blue skies in tuscany - poems about live, love and lesser burdock" des britischen autors hugh d. loxdale entnommen.  die vertonung von "commuting angel" erfolgte mit freundlicher genehmigung des autors und seiner verlegerin und ist teil eines "set into music"-projekts von michael a. schnase. hugh d. loxdale schrieb dieses gedicht inspiriert von der flüchtigen begegnung mit einer unbekannten jungen frau am 15. september 1999 gegen 7:00 uhr abends auf der zugfahrt von london nach harpenden.